http://www.baltimoresun.com/news/maryland/bs-md-camden-line-delayed-20130923,0,3960959.story

http://www.baltimoresun.com/news/maryland/bs-md-camden-line-delayed-20130923,0,3960959.story

“The MARC Camden Line faced serious delays Monday evening after a pedestrian was struck and killed by a southbound train in Prince George’s County, though the tracks were cleared and trains moving by about 8 p.m.” ~ Baltimore Sun (Carrie Wells)

The lead is more focused on the morning commute and is good for letting people who might have been wondering why their train was delayed. It also leaves the name of the pedestrian out of the lead because it is not as important to the readers.

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